Translate a Poem

This workshop looks at a poem by the French poet Ariane Dreyfus.

We invite you to submit your own translation of the poem. As always we welcome a variety of approaches: close translations, 'freer' versions, after-images and metamorphoses of all kinds.

Original poem

RIEN N’EMPÊCHE D’AUTRES OISEAUX


Elle s’arrête quand l’eau lui arrive à la taille
Regarde, avance à nouveau, et la mer infinie
La suit, traîne qu’elle sent à peine, la robe elle l’imagine

S’effacent ses omoplates de petite fille
À chaque fois qu’elle lève les coudes et se hausse
Car il fait froid
Mais l’eau est calme, pas embêtante

Frileux les autres sont restés derrière
C’est donc un instant de princesse

Elle baisse les yeux, mais pas la tête
À cause de sa couronne qui pourrait tomber
Regarde comment ses pieds glissent
Sur le sable
Parce qu’il est très loin les jambes ont grandi
Elles se tordent à plein de reflets
Le soleil y va, en profondeur
Et plus en profondeur la pointe des pieds
Pour aller jusqu’au sol intouché

L’eau presqu’à la poitrine, elle étire ses bras
Ainsi flottent les mains

Puis s’allonger, sinon comment voir que le ciel
Donne un si grand vertige, et les nuages en forme de personne?


Versions

You do not need to have translated poetry before to have a go at translating this poem, nor do you need to speak French fluently.

➔ Read a line-by-line literal translation by Olivia McCannon.

➔ Click play beneath to hear the original poem read by the poet:

» Submit your version

Poem in translation

Gökyüzü başka nasıl görünür

Su beline kadar gelince duruyor
bakınıyor, ve yine yola çıkıyor. Ve
sonsuz olan deniz onu takip ediyor
elbisesini hissedip, önemsemeden giydiği bir kuyruk

Kayıp oluyorlar, o kız kürek kemikleri
her dirseklerini kendisini kaldırmak için yükselttiğinde
Hava buz gibi
Ama sular sakin ve onu rahat bırakıyor.

Soğumak için fazla sıcak olan, diğerler geride kalmışlar.

Demek ki şu an ona ait – prenses

Gözünü indiyor, ama kafasını değil
Kafasındaki taç duşmesin diye
İzle ayakları nasıl kayıyor kumun üzerinden

Aşırı aşağıda olduğu için bacakların
uzaması gerekir. Kıvırıyorlar, parıltı kaldıra kaldıra. Güneş derinliğe ulaşıyor
daha derinde ayak uçları parmak değmemiş karayı tarıyor

Su neredeyse göğüs kısminda, kollarını
uzatıyor. Elleri su uzerinde dolaşabilsin

diye. Ve sonra esniyor – başka nasıl
gökyüzünü görebilsin? Dönüp dönüyor,

Bulutlar bir insan şeklinde ya da hiç kimsenin

Help on translating this poem

You do not have to be a published poet or translator to send in your version, or to have ever translated a poem before. We welcome submissions from all. You can submit your version using the form below. Please note that submissions via this form for this project will not be considered for publication in MPT Magazine, and you should consult our submissions guidelines if you wish to submit something for publication.

Click here to read the translation notes by Susan Wicks.

Click here to read the translation notes by Olivia McCannon.

Press play beneath to listen to a podcast about the poem, featuring Olivia McCannon and Susan Wicks, recorded at the MPT Translation Duel at Ledbury Poetry Festival.

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