Translate a Poem
This workshop looks at a very short poem by the Hungarian poet János Pilinszky. As Mark Baczoni writes in his translation notes, it's a particularly challenging poem to render in English.
We invite you to submit your own translation of the poem. As always we welcome a variety of approaches: close translations, 'freer' versions, after-images and metamorphoses of all kinds.
Click here to read the translation notes.
Here is a poem by the great 20th-century Hungarian poet, János Pilinszky (1921-1981). It’s called 'Négysoros' (Quatrain).
Alvó szegek a jéghideg homokban.
Plakátmagányban ázó éjjelek.
Égve hagytad a folyosón a villanyt.
Ma ontják véremet.
This poem has been translated into English by Ted Hughes and his co-translator János Csokits and is published in their collection of Pilinzsky’s poems, The Desert of Love (Anvil, 1989). Read their translation and listen to an audio recording here.
You do not need to have translated poetry before to have a go at translating this poem, nor do you need to speak Hungarian - a 'literal' translation has been provided from which you may craft your final version.Click here to read the translation notes.
Poem in translation
Iron nails resting in the freezing sand.
Billboard nights soaked in abandonment.
You left the light on in the corridor.
Today my blood is spent.
Help on translating this poem
You do not have to be a published poet or translator to send in your version, or to have ever translated a poem before. We welcome submissions from all. You can submit your version using the form below. Please note that submissions via this form for this project will not be considered for publication in MPT Magazine, and you should consult our submissions guidelines if you wish to submit something for publication.
TRANSLATION WORKSHOP NOTES
The principle driving Hughes and Csokits was literalness, as Hughes says in his introduction to their collection of Pilinszky’s poems The Desert of Love:
'As it is, we settled for literalness as a first principle…These translations, then, in the sense of being word for word are close to the originals, and will have served their purpose if they serve as pointers, to help a reader re-imagine the whole thing.'
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